3 comments on “straight, with salt and a lime

  1. “against a window pane
    where you pressed
    your final goodbye”

    woooow. this is so beautiful. i guess this shows the female side of the story when the man she loves no longer cares for her. i’ve been reading the masculine version of the same story in reading henry miller’s work and he just doesnt do it justice like you do šŸ˜‰ xx

  2. ….”where promises are now just faded ink..” wow – I just love those words.

    Your poetry is awesome my friend xx

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