8 comments on “Journey of Forgotten Flesh

  1. I like the way you trace the narrative of the relationship through the vehicle of introspection. Neat exploration of changing feelings and the impact of embracing someone so fully. – bill

    • hi bill.. it’s been too long since i’ve responded to your comments, i apologize for that. sometimes life comes first and art takes a back seat. i’ve missed it here. your comment was a warm welcome home for me. i’m so glad you appreciated this piece.. it was sort of like the 9 steps of grief but for relationships. perhaps there are more steps i didn’t take yet…

  2. Wow–it’s fantastic and honest–wonderful work.

    our poetry potluck is open, if you have poems (old or new) to share, link in NOW,

    You can link up to 3 poems, the more you share, the happier we are.

    Thanks for the participation! Tuesday 8pm is the deadline to link up, please hurry up!

    Happy Monday Poetry Potluck!

    Happy Tuesday!

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